User blog comment:LizardRizk/Diego/@comment-28511184-20170629063717

Mmm intense

Tip from another writer:

With dialogue make sure your quotation marks are pressed against the first and last letter of the word you are using. Sometimes you do this, but most of the time, you don't. Also you have some punctuation/capitalization errors you need to fix. F i n d t h e m.